a poem… lmao

June 6, 2009

this is a karnii original. i usually don’t write rhyming poetry so… yeah. this isn’t exactly a great poem.


curves are not what’s in
i yearn to be thin:
knees larger than calves
a stomach without flab
bones sticking out of hips
fingers thin as lips
thighs that cannot touch
my weight doesn’t amount to much
so put your hand around my arm
i hope my bones don’t cause much alarm
with exercise alone, pounds don’t go amiss
so give that food a kiss

oh, wow. i think that could be a lot better. i’ll try my best to write something better… or at the BARE MINIMUM revise this fiasco… :-/


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